The magic snowbird

"Sshhrr" Jane and John shivered by the  breeze of the wind.After a few minutes it was very snowy.They were thinking what to do,then  Jane had a marvelous idea.Her idea was to play in the snow.She  told the idea to John. John was jumping in joy.They seeked permission from their mother,so they went out to play.They planned ideas on what structures they wanted to  create with the snow.
They had ideas such  as( the following items below)
-snowman
-snow house
-snowbird
-snow toys
So they made what they thought of making.The snowman was so fat.The snow house was so huge, that they even can go into it. The snowbird was so pretty.The snow toys were so cute.They kept the snow toys into the snow house.Their mother came out of the house to see what they were doing.She saw the things the children had created."Ah" a real snowbird dropped one of its feathers on the head of the snowbird that Jane and John had created.Jane and John asked their mother what was is it  very  unknowingly.Their mother said that it was a magical feather and thier mother went into the house.Jane and John were very interested to know how magicical was it so they sat on the snowbird.It started to fly and talk.It brought them to many special places.Then it brought them back home safely.As the wind was very strong the magic feather flew away from the  snowbird's head that Jane and John  created.Jane and John had a magical experience and a wonderful adventure .